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A Ninja's Road to Pain 01 by ~MeleeMasterX:iconMeleeMasterX:



                                     A Ninja's Road to Pain
                                             -Part 1-

It was a gloomy day in the land of Konohagakure, and as the rain fell, four Genin, under the supervision of their Sensei, went on a daily mission for the Hokage. Though, none of the five ninja knew that today would have an event, that would change their lives forever.

Naruto: Okay you four, the Land of Rain has a dangerous terrain, so be careful alright?

Kale: *Looks at Naruto shyly, then turns away* A-alright...I'll be c-careful..

Aukun: Understood

Keitan: Alright

Alyx: Sure

They leaped through the trees, barely being able to see with all the rain beating down. A few more hours had passed, and now the squad could finally see the Land of Rain. It was completely blind to the others, but Keitan could sense that they were being followed. They were almost there, and it really started to bother her, and Aukun quickly noticed.

Aukun: Hey...Keitan, you look like something's bothering you, what's the matter?

Keitan: *glances up at him* We're being followed..

Aukun: What..? How can you b--

Out of nowhere, a kunai pierced Aukun's arm, causing him to clench it in pain. Keitan tried to help, but she was quickly thrown to the ground by a mysterious shadow. The other three, Naruto, Alyx and Kale, turned around to a fearful sight.

Deidara: We'll be taking these ninja with us.

Konan: Don't try to stop us, or you'll be captured as well.

All of the sudden, from behind Naruto, Kale dashed at Konan with her kunai ready.

Kale: YEAH, RIGHT!!

Though her movements were fast, with one swift kick from Konan, Kale was out cold.

Keitan: Heh..hehe..not bad, but I can do better..

Naruto: NO! STOP!!

Keitan: WATER STYLE, WATER CLAW JUTSU!

End of Part 1
©2009 ~MeleeMasterX
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Author's Comments

Uhm...sorry it was so short..I went away..then had to log off really fast..so forgot to finsih it..sorry guys ^^"

Anyways, yes, I am a Naruto geek at some points..so just a random story of mine with some of my friends in it, they'll know who they are :3

and um...enjoy?

P.S- I realize I cannot write whatsoever..so don't waste comments saying on what I can improve on..I CANNOT improve..trust me xD"

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:icongaani-hatchinto:
yay! it looks good! keep writing cuz i WANNA READ MORE!!!! too bad it's in da land of RAIN tho, cuz im a fire user! ^^

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:iconnaruto13freak:
WOOOO!!!!!!!! i luvs it :3 good job! i like how u call me kale ^_^

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:iconmeleemasterx:
Thats only the beggining silly, it'll go through A LOT of the other lands, no worries xD ^^
:iconmeleemasterx:
Heh, thanks ^^

Glad you likes it :3
:icongaani-hatchinto:
ooh! YAY!

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:iconnaruto13freak:
yayyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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